“There aren’t many of us left in this valley. Last winter claimed half of us, and The Unrest claimed a fair bit more.
“The first uprising took Saul's father. They found him strung up in the middle of town. Birds were picking over his remains. The wild animals had already claimed their share from the bottom half. What was left of him swung in the bitter winter wind.
“A few days later, his mother went to town to see if she could get a Widow’s Pension. It’s not much, but it gives you a ration card. You can get some food at least. Well, you could if the approved items were in stock. But they rarely are, what with all the fighting going on...”
Now I admit, I went slightly over the seven sentence limit--but I could not stand leaving in the middle of a bit of dialogue.
I have been informed that The Rules are as follows:
- Go to page 77 of your current MS
- Go to line 7
- Copy down the next 7 lines as they're written-- no cheating!
- Tag 7 other writers
- Let them know!
So, the lucky
Now, if they follow directions better than I do, at some point they will post their snippets, too!